Friday, 3 January 2014

Annotated Script

Here are some photographs of my annotated script. Some images are difficult to read, so I will type what I have written on the script underneath the image.
 
  • I wave and laugh in delight.
  • I put my hand on my chest, my face reacting to the sweetness of this moment.
  • I do a belly laugh (leaning back).
  • I look intrigued.


  • I reluctantly cover my eyes. Other villagers give me a playful warning, prompting me to cover my eyes fully.
  • I uncover my eyes. My mouth is wide open in shock.
  • I jump back in horror, clinging to my fellow villagers.
  • I say to the villagers next to me, "Gasp! She called her a monster!"
  • I look at The Baroness, terrified as to what she will do next.
  • I look intrigued.



  •  I gasp.
  • I shake my head, thinking "Poor Cinders".
  • I watch in fear as The Baroness gets up, after she had previously fainted.



  • I cringe with embarrassment for them.
  • I continue cringing.



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